Kia ora Aarav! Thank you for sharing lots of great ideas during our Google Meets this week. You have created an amazing poem, I enjoyed reading it from the perspective of the fruit and how the repetition 'not ready yet' added to the feeling of the season. You have presented your mahi clearly and it is well set, next time maybe make your font bigger, when a slide is published to your blog everything is a lot smaller. keep up the excellent mahi Aarav!
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Great work Aarav! I loved your personification poem and the different ways you solved the math problems.
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Aarav.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aarav! Thank you for sharing lots of great ideas during our Google Meets this week. You have created an amazing poem, I enjoyed reading it from the perspective of the fruit and how the repetition 'not ready yet' added to the feeling of the season. You have presented your mahi clearly and it is well set, next time maybe make your font bigger, when a slide is published to your blog everything is a lot smaller. keep up the excellent mahi Aarav!
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