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Friday, 2 July 2021

The Show Is Coming Writing W9

RT: Use research to back up my thinking. Audience: Anyone This is a short poem about the around the world dance that is coming up in our school. The Show is Coming. The show is coming, the teachers know. They're making costumes, wild and vibrant. The show is coming, the students know. They're excited and ready to go. The show is coming, the parents know. They're buzzing with excitement. The show is coming, I know. I've practiced hard and I'm ready to go!

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Aarav, nice work with this snappy poem! You have used rhyming works to good effect. Maybe next time think about how you can set out your blog post. Using spacing between headings and your writing. Great work.

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