Hi Aarav, thank you for posting your week 8 mahi. This writing has a lot of great ideas, adding in the 'Superpowers' idea was a sophisticated theme and worked well in creating a narrative that feels like it has the potential to be a real life event. "Flexing their nuclear muscles" adds humour and highlights the connection well. Great work.
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Hi Aarav, thank you for posting your week 8 mahi. This writing has a lot of great ideas, adding in the 'Superpowers' idea was a sophisticated theme and worked well in creating a narrative that feels like it has the potential to be a real life event. "Flexing their nuclear muscles" adds humour and highlights the connection well. Great work.
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