Hi Aarav, awesome mahi this week. Your opinion is straight to the point. Maybe you could have added examples to lengthen and strengthen your point? I especially like your interpretaion of your art. It connects nicely with the commumity I thought. Did you find a nice public wall to display it cos I think it definately deserves a spotlight position. Keep up the great mahi. PS totally dig you profile pic
Kia ora Aarav, great mahi this week! Your art piece is simple and striking, the connection to our area is evident with the green earth and koru shapes that signify peace. Thank you for highlighting the evidence in the text that shows the opinions of the writers who are debating graffiti. This is well set out and you thought hard about your response to the issue. You have done some maths practise which is also set out clearly, remember to show all your working out so the audience can learn from you. Excellent week.
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Hi Aarav, awesome mahi this week. Your opinion is straight to the point. Maybe you could have added examples to lengthen and strengthen your point? I especially like your interpretaion of your art. It connects nicely with the commumity I thought. Did you find a nice public wall to display it cos I think it definately deserves a spotlight position. Keep up the great mahi. PS totally dig you profile pic
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