Kia ora Aarav! You have identified the authors purpose for writing the must read texts as to inform people, and that there was more than one point of view. Your idea to use a pack of playing cards to create a new game was clever, using a resource that already exists means you could focus on the new game idea. I thought your game was fantastic, using the worth of the card as the winning factor meant it was easy to follow but also taught a new skill. Your game would be a very good maths game for students who are learning numbers to 10 and it would teach them the value of numbers as they rise. Excellent thinking. I saw that you were working on the dominoes puzzle, yes it is challenging! Did you know that the blank domino can be any value you want? That might help you. Your poems were beautifully presented and the words you used to describe the game were spot on. I had a laugh when I saw "your cheating!" very funny. Great mahi Aarav.
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Kia ora Aarav! You have identified the authors purpose for writing the must read texts as to inform people, and that there was more than one point of view. Your idea to use a pack of playing cards to create a new game was clever, using a resource that already exists means you could focus on the new game idea. I thought your game was fantastic, using the worth of the card as the winning factor meant it was easy to follow but also taught a new skill. Your game would be a very good maths game for students who are learning numbers to 10 and it would teach them the value of numbers as they rise. Excellent thinking. I saw that you were working on the dominoes puzzle, yes it is challenging! Did you know that the blank domino can be any value you want? That might help you. Your poems were beautifully presented and the words you used to describe the game were spot on. I had a laugh when I saw "your cheating!" very funny. Great mahi Aarav.
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